One strength I feel confident about is my analysis about how people feel excluded in a society because I feel like I do a good job on digging deeper into the meaning on a quote.

One weakness I need to work on is fixing or takin gout unnecessary sentences because sometimes it makes my paper a little confusing. Or taking sentences out that I believe are repetitive because in this paper some of my ideas were repetitive.

I learned from the interview that even though my follow up answers were strong, I could defiantly make it more interactive next time. There were a lot of positive comments and my auto was good so I think I did a good job on the first interview for paper 2.